? that was migraine inducing to read.
And why would she let an accomplice walk free??? The dude helped the criminal dude fake his death and escape ? and you let him escape???? An accessory to crime??? Are you stoopid???
This plot and the storytelling itself is just so messy and shallow and honestly down right stoopid and the godforsaken translation is the cherry on top.
Goodbye. Dropping to this to the abyss ?
I kinda liked this story from the beginning it had so much potential. It had the foundation of a good story but the name inconsistencies, incorrect chapter being uploaded and the GOD AWFUL level of grammar from translations really kill it for me.
The most unbearable thing to me though is that Ivona the FL who started out with SO much potential has become something else.
She could be a total badass with her desire to correct her first go at a life of abuse and just being used but it’s not happening. Again and again Gaspal or whatever the f his name is supposed to be keeps getting away with his crimes. And then her cousin. There HAD to be a much better more drama inducing way for her to reveal she knew his treachery. I am so disappointed with this little smoke that could have been a raging inferno!
If you’re going to make a story centered on a characters need for justice then do it! Not this feather on fire imitation of a raging bonfire!
I really tried to hang on with this story but there are so many little things just coming out that I just can’t take. The grammar nuclear bomb that is presenting as a good story translation is certainly a contributing factor.
So with great regret I will be dropping this one. Maybe I’ll give it another chance in the future. If the grammar is fixed and the story line doesn’t drag on like the never ending Star Wars movies.
i will not recommend these kind of reading anymore. at first its going great but now the character name change a lot and plot twist is really messed up real bad. also translation is really fucked up. if u gonna make manhwa and attract people to support it then do it properly. but if continously making manhwa like this, its really gving some negative review on every author.
Why novel isekai mc think the story won't change
? that was migraine inducing to read.
And why would she let an accomplice walk free??? The dude helped the criminal dude fake his death and escape ? and you let him escape???? An accessory to crime??? Are you stoopid???
This plot and the storytelling itself is just so messy and shallow and honestly down right stoopid and the godforsaken translation is the cherry on top.
Goodbye. Dropping to this to the abyss ?
Poknut
sometimes i just wonder why make the mc strong but also make her dumb? like she just let that ass get awqay freely? like what
Fortune Kookie
I kinda liked this story from the beginning it had so much potential. It had the foundation of a good story but the name inconsistencies, incorrect chapter being uploaded and the GOD AWFUL level of grammar from translations really kill it for me.
The most unbearable thing to me though is that Ivona the FL who started out with SO much potential has become something else.
She could be a total badass with her desire to correct her first go at a life of abuse and just being used but it’s not happening. Again and again Gaspal or whatever the f his name is supposed to be keeps getting away with his crimes. And then her cousin. There HAD to be a much better more drama inducing way for her to reveal she knew his treachery. I am so disappointed with this little smoke that could have been a raging inferno!
If you’re going to make a story centered on a characters need for justice then do it! Not this feather on fire imitation of a raging bonfire!
I really tried to hang on with this story but there are so many little things just coming out that I just can’t take. The grammar nuclear bomb that is presenting as a good story translation is certainly a contributing factor.
So with great regret I will be dropping this one. Maybe I’ll give it another chance in the future. If the grammar is fixed and the story line doesn’t drag on like the never ending Star Wars movies.
Nonodamn95
i will not recommend these kind of reading anymore. at first its going great but now the character name change a lot and plot twist is really messed up real bad. also translation is really fucked up. if u gonna make manhwa and attract people to support it then do it properly. but if continously making manhwa like this, its really gving some negative review on every author.