These chapters is a bit choppy and fast pace making the story feel off as you read each part. iy has great potential and the thoughts are great but transition feels off in some way. it has a great setup and interesting art to give idea of the characters perception. it feels like it need something to slow it down but overall is a good story to read.
Engima
These chapters is a bit choppy and fast pace making the story feel off as you read each part. iy has great potential and the thoughts are great but transition feels off in some way. it has a great setup and interesting art to give idea of the characters perception. it feels like it need something to slow it down but overall is a good story to read.