Where is this story going??
At first I thought it was just going to be that somebody took over Eleanors body or her memories were just straight up wiped out and Caidel would try to free her or help her get her memories back but the story just keeps getting worse and worse.
The two people he thought were the closest to him betrayed him (which really pissed me off) and the long backstory I just had to skip. Now this cringey, cliche bussiness where Caidel doesn’t know a thing?? It’s like the author never wants the story to end. Also I feel like the art just keeps getting more off, the faces they make are too cringey.
Also, Caidel has no idea what consent and personal space are.
This whole story in general is a big mess, I’ll probably end up dropping it altogether.
I know rightist this story is a complete mess. At first the speed was good so I felt good about it . Bt now it’s just torture and plot twists and too much betrayal. Srsly I sometimes wonder if the author got some kind of betrayal that’s been torturing them……… ?? if that’s the case I hope it gets better . Cuz I srsly feel depressed after reading this ?
Kaori
Where is this story going??
At first I thought it was just going to be that somebody took over Eleanors body or her memories were just straight up wiped out and Caidel would try to free her or help her get her memories back but the story just keeps getting worse and worse.
The two people he thought were the closest to him betrayed him (which really pissed me off) and the long backstory I just had to skip. Now this cringey, cliche bussiness where Caidel doesn’t know a thing?? It’s like the author never wants the story to end. Also I feel like the art just keeps getting more off, the faces they make are too cringey.
Also, Caidel has no idea what consent and personal space are.
This whole story in general is a big mess, I’ll probably end up dropping it altogether.
ssnseries
I know rightist this story is a complete mess. At first the speed was good so I felt good about it . Bt now it’s just torture and plot twists and too much betrayal. Srsly I sometimes wonder if the author got some kind of betrayal that’s been torturing them……… ?? if that’s the case I hope it gets better . Cuz I srsly feel depressed after reading this ?